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Do You Make These Mistakes With Your ‘Words That Sell’?
May 6th, 2008
Sales Letters, Sales Copy and Words That Sell
A resource that I keep near my desk to help me find just the right words for my sales letters and emails is ‘Words That Sell’ By Richard Bayan.
One of the areas that I think we all make the most mistakes is what Richard calls ‘”Puffspeak”. That is - inflated words and phrases that have made their way into our every day language without real need.
Check to see if you use these in your sales letters and copywriting:
Puffspeak and The Translation
At this point in time = Now
conceptualize = think
cost-effective = profitable or money saving
counterproductive = futile
effectuate = bring about
ramifications = consequences
state-of-the-art = latest
transpired = happened
When we train companies in words that sell and business writing we encounter these and many more, far worse culprits.
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